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Edward Elric was tried of takeing crap from Roy Mustang. He wanted it to stop but how? Ed couldn't just fight him could he? "Hmmm." Ed thought to himself. "The  Colonel must have a weakness, but what? Well theres water, maybe." Ed went to watch "the Colonel" and see if he could find out something. Ed use his alchemy to make a hole in the wall (ever tho the door was open) to see what he could see. Roy was in his office, leaning back in his chair, with his feet up on the desck and he was barefooted. He also seem to be asleep. Lieutenant Lisa Hawkeye came with more papper work for Roy. He did not seem to note-diss she walk into the room.  "Sir." She said but Roy did not answer. "Yep. He must be asleep." Ed thought.
Then Hawkeye did something Ed thought she would never do. Frist she close the door. Then she pull up a chair and sat herself in fort of Roy's Mustang feet. "What the heck is she doing? Why is the Lieutenant, stearing at Mustang's feet? Don't they smell? " Ed said to himself. If they did smell, Lisa did not seem to mind it. She tit her head to look at his from a deffrent ang-ull. Hawkeye softly:Wow. Who knew Roy's feet where so cute. "Cute!? She thinks Roy's feet are cute!? Cazy bitch". After Ed thought that he look down at his own feet. "One metal, one flesh. Maybe I'm not one to talk."
Hawkeye:I wonder what they feel like? Are they rough or smooth? Hmmm. One way to find out. And with that she took two of her fingers and started to gintel stroke his left foot. Hawkeye:Oh. Its soft and smooth. WOW! Now she was touching both of his feet. Just feeling. Stroking up and down and left and right and makeing circels all over his feet. This went on for a little while, untell Roy burst out laughing!


Lisa jump back and scream. Hawkeye:Ahhh! Your awake!

ROY:And you were tickling my feet.

Lieutenant Lisa Hawkeye's cheeks blush red at this and trun her head away. Hawkeye:I'm sorry, I'm sorry. I...just saw yor feet and had to toutch them. Roy has put his feet on the ground and was now looking at her,with a smile on his face.

ROY:Well I'm flatter. But did you have to tickle them!?

Hawkeye:I,I didn't mean to. They were just so cute and I had to toutch them and once I started,  couldn't stop! There just so soft and smooth... Roy's laughter inter-rupt her.

ROY:Ha,ha,ha. So you think my feet are cute? And you just had to toutch them. Is tht right?

Lisa was blushing big time. Roy found it quite cute. Hawkeye:Yes that is corect sir.

ROY:Well maybe I'll let you give me a foot rub some time. But for now you must be punish. Hawkeye:punish? ROY:Yes, punish. Hawkeye:But,but...

Be for she could say anything else, Roy jump her. He grab Lisa and then started tickle her. hey fell to the floor, laughing and tickling each other and Ed watch the whole thing.

Ed:So thats the Colonel weakness. His ticklish!!

                                                                              to be continued
Well this was fun. I just got a idea of Ed tickling Roy and went from there. I did not plan this story be for hand, like I have with my other stories. For this I pretty much just free ball it. Got to say, it was pretty fun. Don't know if I'll do it again. But I will say this. I like it when things go as I plan and I like it when thry trun out better! And fun is fun.
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inokeke Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013
i liked it
Ticklecom Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2011
If you are going to read this, say something.
HexalianRebelAgent Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
That's cute! And foreshadowing! Yay!
sophiaelric Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
her name is riza hawkeye not lisa
Ticklecom Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Well I'm glad you like it. I just wish more poelpe would read my fics. Tickleguy got lots of readers.
ItachiWatchi Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2010
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