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Ok. My frist Death note fanfic request ever!I'm findly getting to it. This is for avrillavignerox101. Hope you will like it.

After some thought I'm going to make this story about the past. Back when L and near and Mello were in that place. L is 19, Mello is 17 and Near is 9. Not sure if this what you want avrillav BUT seeing as how you likw my work I;m pretty sure you will like this.

Mello and Near were both tried of L annying them and not playing with them anymore.

Mello:Ever since he started "crime sloving" he has no time for us.

Near:Yeah. Its no fun and no fair.

Mello:We should do something.

Near:Yes. But what? Lets go to my room and try and think of something.

So the two young men did just that. Mello was always so surpise at just how many toys NEar had in his room. As Mello made his way to a chair he step on a toy and hurt his foot. He yelld "ow" grab it, jump around and sat on the bed as fast as he could.

Near:Are you all right?

Mello:No! I step on a damn toy and it hurt!

Near:Here. Let me take a look at it.

Near came over and examening Mello's foot. It was ok but Near find himself for the frist time ever, wonder if some one was ticklish. If Mello was ticklish. So he tickled the foot. Mello quicky pull it away.

Mello;What the hell are you doing Near?

Near:I'm sorry. I,I,,I just couldn't help myself. I just had to tickle you.

Meloo:Say that again.


Mello:That last part.

Near:I had to tickle you.

Mello:Thats it!

Near:Whats it?

Mello:Thats how we get L. We will tickle him!

Near:Thats brilliant! I call L's feet!

Mello: Dude I want to tickle L's feet.

Near:Well I called it frist.

Mello:Alright. You ask for it.

Mello jump Near and tickle his sides. Near laugh his cute little head off but also tickle Mello's armpits. Mello put his arms down but couldn't really tickle Near when he did so he let up. They both fell on the floor with laughter. After awhile thay stop.

Mello:All right. We can both tickle his feet.

Near:Find by me.

Side note:The reason being why Mel and Near want to tickle L's feet so bad is becuse he has just stop wearing shoes, so they have both seen his feet and have both wonder if they are ticklish.

Near and Mello made there plans to get L. They got a sleeping pill and put in a cupcake and gave it to L. He was soon fast asleep. Mello and Near came in and got him. Soon L woke up and and found himself shirtless and tied to a bed. Mello's bed. His feet however were tied up on a cushion stool. L felt a bit panic and worred but he knew who had done this.

L:All rghit. I know its you two knuckle heads. Near, Mello. Get out here now and untie me now please.

Near and Mello came out with very evil smiles on there faces and a sack. Mello was holding the sack.

Near:Hello L. Glad your awake at last.

Mello:Yes. And we are not going to untie you. We have plans for you.      

L:Then waht are you going to do to me?

Near:Get you back.

L:For what?

Mello:For not playing with us anymore.

Mello came at L and tickle his sides. L tried to keep it in. He was very good at it. Both Near and Mello had trouble telling if he ticklish or not. They tried a few things feathers and such but nothing seem to work. But they haven't tickle his feet yet.

Near:Wow L. You really are in control. But I wonder what would happen if we tickle your feet.

Mello:Yes. Your feet.

L:No! Not my feet. Please anything but my feet. I'll laugh for you just don't tickle my feet,ever please.

Near and Mello exchange looks. And they both dive for L's feet.

Near got his right foot and Mello the left.

L:No! Please don't! DON'T!

But L's pleas fell on def ears. Mello and Near tickle L's feet like crazy. And L couldn't hold it in. He laugh like crazy.

L:Ha,ha,ha,ha,ha! Please stop!

But they didn't. Just kep at it. L tried very heard to get away but couldn't. He toss and squirm. Mello and Near were having a grad time. They never seen L like this be for, ever. Nor have they ever seen him smile so much and nor have they ever heard him laugh so much.
Just when they were about to take it to the next level, Watari came in. Mello and Near stop at once, trun and gasp.

Watari:What is going on here? I heard L screaming and came to see what was going on.

Near: Oh um. You want to take it Mel?

Mello look ar Near and gave him a face.

L:Help me Watari. There tortureing me!

Watari:Good lord.

Watari came over and untied L as fast as he could. Then he help L up. L gave them a look as he left the room. As soon as they were gone, Mello and Near fell down laughing like crazy!               THE END  

Well there you dude. Hope you like. But if not I guess I can write a new one for yas.
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RavenFiore Featured By Owner May 5, 2017
your spelling is absolute crap, and your grammar needs work. I couldn't understand half the garbage wrote here.
Ticklecom Featured By Owner May 27, 2017
Ok. First off, ouch. And I'm ssorry for being such and bad speller. I try, I really but you know, no one is born knowing how to read or write or spell for that matter. And for some reason, I don't know why, (I really don't) learning how to spell words has always been really, really hard. (Sigh) I also suck at math too. Guess I was dorn bumb. Cuz all know if you can't read or write you are stupid. Guess that gos for spelling as well. Anyhoo, I try. I'm not a turd.
cronusplus Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is really cute! We need more Death Note tickling, honestly.
AnimeBerry286 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2012  Student Artist
:iconinuevillaughplz: I want Near and Mello to do that to me! I must dress up like L! XD
Ticklecom Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012
Guess you like it huh?
avrillavignerox101 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
:happybounce: :happybounce: YAY!! OMG!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!! EEP!!
Ticklecom Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2017
Say.... do you have foot fetish? Dose anyone here?
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